Mara De Saulles
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Here's my little cat! I think next time I attempt this exercise I'll definitely do a few more exploration/development sketches before going into the final. But overall I am pleased with how it came out!
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Been busy with uni recently, but managed to get these done inbetween working. While they're not bad, watching the demo definitely gave me some good advice on where I can improve!
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Gave both levels a try! I think right now my biggest weakness are line confidence and my ability to draw a straight line. I also didn't simply enough in a few areas. Definitely going to have to keep practicing those skills. Any other feedback would be appreciated!
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I was able worried I wasn't gonna be able to do this well but I think I did decent, but I felt like I was unsure of the values still.
Mara De Saulles
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You've done a good job at shading the values to make them consistent throughout each shape! However, I do agree that there is an issue with the values - I think your values are a little too close to each other! Your dark midtone especially looks like a shadow to me, though that's my personal interpretation.
I can see you've tried to make sure each shape is distinct, which is great! But be careful with those outlines - they end up affecting the values on either side of them, which might be contributing to the issues you're having with those. This is especially true with the highlights.
As others have said, keep proportions in mind in the future. But for a first attempt at this project, you've done quite well! Make sure to watch the demo now to compare and contrast what you've done.
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Hello! Glad to be able to partake in this course! Did all three examples of Level 1, and Level 2, before the release of the demo. I'll be sure to give these another try with the help of the demo, but until then I am looking forward to seeing the critque videos!