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Maestro
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6d
added comment inProject - Value Composition Thumbnails
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Would be thankful for a critique.
Maestro
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16d
Asked for help
Native American was tough, might redo it but later since my eyes are in pain from squinting too much
Good work!
I think i can give you some pointers in this excercise:
- Although the idea is to do thumbnails, i think your are very smal and you have very little space to divide the shapes.
- For me it is not clear if you are working with two tones or three. I feel that this is because you are being quite inconsistent with tone.
- I think that using feling the shape complitely with the tone you give to it is very useful. It gives to the drawing a better sense of being finish and also you could get a better sense of how well you decision with the tone was.
Hope this is useful!
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27d
Hi! The darker end of the scales are pretty good, but keep an eye out for the transition from the lightest square to the middle greys. I think lightening square #2 for both scales will create a more even transition since they currently appear darker than squares #3. Once you have that down, see if you can push the middle three values in the top scale, since they appear rather similar-- so lightening #4 and darkening #6. I hope this helps :)
May Berry
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3mo
I started to experiment with scribbling in ideas and using thumbnail sketches. I try to 'anthropomorphize' the buildings and convey some sort of feeling. I find that I like using a ballpoint pen over a pencil for quick sketches.