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Nathan CIPIERE
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5d
added comment inProject - The Shape Method
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Hey Michael, here is mine. That's the first time Im sending an assignement, thank you so much for those precious contents. I'm a big fan of your pedagogy.
Scott
5d
Very expressive lines
Nathan CIPIERE
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2yr
Can't wait to start the long run and improve a lot. Here is where I am from now, looking forward to get better at value, line quality and everything. I'm really happy sharing the journey with you guys, let's work together !
At first I was intimidated by your advanced skill and thought I might be in the wrong course but I now value your input as we progress. Glad for all those advanced artists sharing the journey with me.
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2yr
This is wonderful. Your line quality is great already. The places I think you'll be able to improve the most are shading (values and edges) and shape design. With this one specifically the edge work jumps out at me. There are areas that could really use some softer edges and less contrast. For example the furrow between his bottom lip and chin is so sharp and high contrast that it almost looks like his lip crease is frowning. Also the contour of his jaw on the left. Both of these could use a variety in sharp, form and soft edges instead of sharp all around.
I hope the course gives you enough info make progress where you want it!
Great drawing. Loving the way you use line.