I did the light and shadow approach. The first one is before watching Proko’s demo, and the second is after the demo. I think there’s some improvements maybe?

I find it’s a little bit hard to use just the tip of the pencil to draw light lines while I am holding my pencil higher. I always end up using the side of the pencil, and my lines start to get thicker and the texture of the paper stands out more. I’m wondering if there’s any way that I can improve my light line quality.