@johnlevi
added comment inhand Study ..
3yr
nice perspective and line drawing
nice work
3yr
Nice line structure
I think your values and forms are not enough that’s why it looks flat ,
shadows are meant to be dark .
Try to start to much more easy subject like sphere, egg ,box to practice values portraiture is too complicated for values, forms ,shapes etc. .✌️
3yr
your gesture is not that bad ,gesture is about the flow of the pose
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