I have completed,the lower back asignment.I am looking for critique on ma drawings . I was trying to comunicate the gesture, and motion of the muscles, while being accurate with their placement. Some pointers on my rendered studie would be apreciated.Does it read 3d, and did I cept the gesture flowing? Thank you in advance, have a nice day.

Hello, these are my attempts before watching the critique video.It really helps to know the anatomy so I can represent form with my shading not just copy shapes and edges.But it is hard to keep myself in that 3d mentality while shading. Do you guys strugle with that?

2021/10/31. Good morning everyone. Here is my 30 min warm-up exercise. I finished in 28 min. I tried to draw the subject focusing on the shadows and the negative spaces between them trying to limit the use of lines as much as possible. The result is not so accurate but I am happy to have experimented with a different approach. Thank you and good day.

My exersice :-) Feedback wanted :-)

2021/10/31. Good morning everyone. Here’s my first attempt for this section. Thanks a lot.

I would start with learning lanscape bekause it gives you more opportunity for abstract shape designe, and learning composition, witch you can use later in figure painting. Also it would be a good idea to practice simultaniously the two. And doing stil life and cast studies is a good ide to introduce yourself to the fundamentals. That is just my opinion do. Hope that helps, have a nice day!

Done some more drawings after watching the critique video. I feel like I have a good understandig of the shoulder muscles now. What do you guys think?

Here is my attempt for the assignment. I am looking for some feedback on how can I improve on thees. Have a nice day!

Here are my drawings of the oblique, the third page is completly invented. I am looking for some feedback. Have a nice day :)

I am looking for feedback on my ab studies,they took about 10 minites each.

So today whas skull day for my practice,I am pretty happy with the construction,but I am not sure aboute the shadow mapping, the shapes are fine but I dont think I am using the right adges, any suggestions about that?

How would you define good designe, and how does one study that area of art?

I focused on accuret proportions,and flowing gesture with these,and added some structure to them afterwards. Please tell me if you see anything wrong with them,thanks have a good day.

I did some drawings of the 3d model, to familiarise miself with the forms before doing the tracings. I am not entirely happy with the shape design, but I gues I just havent drawn it enough yet. Any feedback would be much apreciated.

Finally bringing all the torso bones together:D, here is todays practice, if you see any errors please tell me, so I can improve faster

Studies for assignment. These ones I didn't have too much trouble with compared with the last two.