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Grace Yoon
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1yr
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Looking forward to learning!
Grace Yoon
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3yr
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Hi, I was hoping to get critique for figure drawings I did at a live life drawing session. I would love any advice or criticism so I can keep improving. Thank you!
Grace Yoon
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3yr
Here is my assignment. I just used plastilina and my hands. I've never done sculpting before. I'm looking forward to learning from you!
Jan Hájek
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4yr
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Started to learn recently, any ideas what´s working and what´s not working, what to change? any feedback on my gesture drawings would be most appreciated. Most of them are 2 minutes.
Serena Marenco
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4yr
Your gesture are actually good, your line are strong and precise.
But the way you add the lights using blue is not easy to read, especially considering that you don't put any shadows in those sketches: since they are quick sketches maybe it's better not to worry about the glares, they just make the reading of the shape a little fuzzy (they look like corrections)
On the other hand, the indigo sketches are very effective, as is the last one where you suggest shadows with much more readability than those in two colours.
In short, keep it simple
Ammar Habash
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4yr
hello, this is my first time giving a critique on proko2.0
First of all i wanted to say that the drawings look super good and i enjoy looking at them ,but the only thing that i noticed that maybe you could improve a bit are the blue drawings, they look a bit stiff to me, for example the drawing with the woman sitting on a the box with her back facing us, her back looks a bit like a box or a square.
Maybe something that would help you is focusing a bit more on the flow of the gestures.
But overall i really like the drawings :)
Uku Kivisild
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4yr
Hi Grace, the gestures look great, read well and feel natural, well done! I am struggling with gesture drawings myself but what is helping me is drawing the same pose several times. For example if you draw a pose 3 times you are more likely to see common mistakes or work on correcting the mistakes on each one. I notice that the gesture on my 1st try is usually stiffer and the last try is more dynamic and natural looking.
When you draw a pose and notice mistakes just try fixing them on the next try until you get the pose down how you like it.
Hope this helps. I like your gesture drawings though and not the right person to critique them, sorry.
I have attached examples of how I go about it.
Felix Oesinghaus
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4yr
I think these are generally pretty great! I Proportions are good and there is a good balance of mostly straight lines and some curves. I like 1, 7 and 8 the most. With 3 and 4 the perspective seems a bit confusing, where is the horizon supposed to be? Also good idea to do some longer poses after warming up with shorter ones so you're forced to commit to more detail as well!
Shaurya Jhaldiyal
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4yr
These are amazing grace! These remind me of Steve Huston's gesture drawings. I think you should move to longer gesture studies maybe add in some more anatomy.
Anyway these are very elegant!!
PoopMan BoxMan
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4yr
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I've been familiar with gesture before but I've decided to finally share my drawings and improve my gesture drawings once and for all! For these drawings, I've mainly tried to capture the expression of the pose. Please feel free to critique! :::DDD