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1yr
added comment inCritique - Simplify Pear from Observation
Here are both attempts at the first project. I rushed through the first one and the second attempt was after watching the critique video. Both were done in Clip Studio Paint. The order of the images are reversed. Any feedback is appreciated.
David Kobilnyk
1yr
nice job simplifying. I think the black line running down the pear is too prominent. the shadow in attempt 2 on the left looks pretty realistic to me. unexpectedly, I can sense the 3d aspect of the pear in attempt 1 more than in attempt 2. I think the grainy feel of attempt 1 overall gives me more sense of material substance.
