hi, I would say the values are pretty good, but it comes pretty close together between the lights and the shadows. Try to make the seperation in shadow/light values a bit more noticeable. The values you put down are not consistent, for the halftone for example. Try to make it one consistent value, where you fill up the shape evenly and with one tone. Also I noticed that maybe your proportions are a bit off, but it doesn't matter, because this still reads like a pear. The shadow on the other hand, is facing the wrong direction. If you used the reference photo from the project, the shadow should be going to the top left instead of the bottom left. Based on the highlights you put, this should be the case.