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Below are some of my more recent attempts. Not sure if the portraits are boxy enough.
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Tomek
Hello, Here are my attempts at heads 1-3 (I plan to do the rest over the week). I had some trouble deciding where the top of the box should be - should it follow the forehead ond leave the top poking out, or go up to the top and leave a lot ampty space inside? I also couldn't decide in picture 3 if I was seeing the bottom plane or not.
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@trrahul
This was hard but fun. Struggled a lot with 6, 8 and 9. I was drawing lines parallel to the 'eyebrow line' and the 'lip line' to find the box edges.
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Tomek
Looks nice, especially number 3! In your drawing nr 2, it looks like the box is converging towards the viewer, not away. Some of the other examples dont look like boxes in perspective, but tapering boxes in perspective
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julien Gaumet
Hi everyone ! After few attempts on paper, it felt so difficult I chose trying tracing over pictures first. Even like this it was quite a challenge. I did all the picture this way but posted only a few. As the picture number grew, I felt a little more confident. Please let me know if it feels right to you. On most picture, it was really difficult to find convergence between the lines because I was really influenced by parts on the face. When I switched my mind into “cross contour” mode, it helped in my opinion. Waiting for your opinion on these and I’ll try again on paper without pictures underneath ! Thank you guys for your help !
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Tomek
Looks nice. Some things that catch my eye: 2. The centreline should be going through the middle of the mouth and the base of the nose - I think yours goes too much to the right at the bottom. 10. Line for bottom of the face is following the jawline instead of the box. I think there should be a vanishing point on the left, relatively close to the page. 18. It feels like the top plane is too small - not sure why. 19. I feel like bottom corner of the box is too low? 7. The centreline is not going through the centre (too far to the left at the brow line)
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Tomek
My 2nd try, this time I have done it with a fineliner. Sadly, when going over pencil lines, I got confused what was in fron of what. I did some light cross hatching to try to take atention away from these mistakes. The lines are too wobbly. I get too focused on perspective that I slow down my strokes too much. I think the windowsill has the worst perspective errors here.
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@pedrobranco
Does this count for lvl 2? I'll upload some more as the week goes on. I'm slowly warming up to this exercise. But I have to say, making stuff scale is so hard without reference. I'm aware that some of the chairs don't follow consistency as the ones closer to the viewer should always be bigger but by the time I'd notice I decided to just leave them be as I don't know how to properly scale them anyway. Heck the bust was one of the last things I included and that thing's way too big. By the time I drew it I was already aware that my objects weren't consistent in their size. The weird round thing is a poof and the robot man is inspired by Steven Zapata's Box Men exercise in his Beginner exercises course (check it out). This is inspired by my art classroom. Coming up with stuff to fill the room is taxing, not to mention with remembering how stuff that's there in the first place even looks. I refuse to use a ruler to help, am I being stupid? I know it's a tool and it's meant to be used but since I'm still learning it's better for my growth to try and ghost or do stuff by eye right? I can make it easy for myself and use these tools once I'm better is how I see it but do tell me if I'm being silly.
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Tomek
I also refuse a ruler, because drawing straight lines is one of the things I want to learn to do, so you are not alone. I think in this piece you may be drawing with a bit of 2 point perspective? The horizontal lines on the chairs look like they are angled to upper right.
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Tomek
Here is my 1st attempt. For lines far away from the vanishing point, I had some problem getting them t point to the right direction. I also had problem keeping the longesst lines straight. I'll try to make a better one tomorrow.
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Tomek
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Here is the 1st half of the poses. I like how some of them turned out. I struggled a bit with how to make the feet look OK, and I don't think I succeeded. I also should try to get a better line quality for these.
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Tomek
Also, while not the goal of the exercise, I checked how well I got the proportions. Needs improvement, but at least I am getting torso to limbs ratio correct-ish. In pose 10 I got my drawing to be pretty accurate.
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Tomek
I have tried 3 portraits with just eyeballing and then double checking few proportions and I am a bit impressed by myself. Below is my most recent try. Proportions are noticebly worse than when following the previous methods, but they are close enough and getting better every portrait. I am surprised I can get this in about 15 minutes compared to ~1h of the previous lesson. I think at this rate I will be able to improve them quickly.
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Tomek
Below are my seals. As there were a lot of them, I am attaching only the most notable drawings. First are my worst ones. I think the seals that were just lying on the ground were the hardest. The other 2 pictures have my best attempts, even though I made one of the seals look like a dog.
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Tomek
I wasn't planning on submitting level 2, but I've found myself doodling seals before bed, so here they are.
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Tanya Gulchin
Looks like his left eye should've been placed a dash lower ;) I'd appreciate any criticism
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Tomek
Both eyes should be a bit lower, but it does look good.
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Tomek
Here is my 1st try. Could have gone better. The biggest problem is that I have made the forehead way too small, with eyes and nose being way too high. It threw off the position of the ear, as I was relating it to the rest of features. The jawline was also off. I thought I have measured the nose position reasonably well, so I am surprised it is way up. Still, there are some parts that turned out to not be bad. Mouth beard and neck are close, and so are the widths of eyes and nose. Will have to try bunch more times. I'll try to post another attemts before the deadline as a response to this post.
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Tomek
Portrait number 4. This time I made all the lines very strong at the end, so it would be easier to see all of them overlaid over the photo. Another one where I am quite happy with major proportions. For the initial face shape I measured width to heigh ratio and then drew the face outline without detailed measurements (I was paying attention to line angles and eyeballing where angle changes should be, not measuring their positions precisely with a pencil; I am quite surprised I got it relatively right this way). I focused my measurements on the face, and then drew hair and body quicker, comparing them in my head to plumlines of different facial features. Not bad results, but I probably should at least measure distances to outermost shapes to better contain them. For smaller details, I see that here and in the previous drawings I make the eyes open too wide. I'll try to get them better next time.
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Tomek
3rd try. This one is much better than the previous ones. The headshape and feature placements seem largely correct, with problems occuring on smaller scale. I wonder if the photo bein head-on made it easier. During the drawing I abandoned 1st attemt in the middle because I realized I made the face to wide and was far enough in the drawing that I thought starting over would be faster. I must try to catch large mistakes like that faster.
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Tomek
OK, 2nd try and I do see improvement. Forehead eyes and nose are now closer to the correct positions. For this one I see I got the mouth shape wrong. I also had a problem with the ear and the neck proportions. The neck is due to me making bottom of the face too wide at the beginning. I noticed and corrected it, but forgot to adjust the neck to match. I think it also caused middle of the shirt to move to the left. Overall, I am much happier with this one.
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Juice
Here is my assignment. Does someone here know how you can compare proportions like proko does in Photoshop But in procreate instead?
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Tomek
Wow, your later attemts are much better than the 1st.
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Tomek
Here is my 1st try at the assignment.
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Tomek
Here are my 2 attempts. As the assignment was to trace a photo, I tried using a screenless drawing tablet instead of a pencil - it made it harder for me to keep the lines from getting wobbly. The hierarchy of importance was my 1st try. I tried to break the lines into 3 groups - outer contour; lines of body parts; details and skinfolds. I think I made the widths to similar and didn't vary width od individual lines - will have to redo it later. Shadows and light was my 2nd try. I am in general mory happy with it - I increased the variation of line thickness and tried to temper the lines more. In some places I think I went overboard and extended the contours to include some of the shadow shapes.
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Tomek
I have redone the hierarchy of importance one and I am now much happier with it. Aside from the contour, I've tried to emphasize the horn, the eye and the ground the rhino is standing on.
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