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Hey, @Naama Sh, I think the feathers and additions look fun! :D
As far as the bony landmarks are concerned, I think you’re doing great. On another note, I’d suggest maybe experiment pushing the gesture exaggeration a bit more when the pose allows for. I’m attaching a couple os examples to illustrate the concept of what I’m thinking of.
Hope this helps!
Naama Sh
3yr
Hey Liandro! Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll definitely try to push the gestures more :)
Steve Lenze
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3yr
Hey Naama,
Your drawings look pretty solid and dimensional, and have good gesture. The only thing I would say is that your first two drawings have proportion issues, but the last three look pretty cool :)
Hello errybody!
I'd be really glad to get some critique and feedback on those.
Please ignore the occasional feathers and additions to the human anatomy :'D
Thank you very much in advance.
Naama Sh
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3yr
They look good, you are definitively simplifying to the basic forms without getting distracted by the contours too much. I don't know about animal anatomy but I feel like in the 2nd bear and the big cat of your third page are little stretch out in the zone between their pelvis and rib cages, but without the reference photos I can't know for sure, but in any case you did good job, i think the biggest thing here are the perspective of the building blocks themselves and the proportions, but the perspective would improve when you start actually focus on studying perspective specifically and you'll learn about proportions and measurement later on in the course.
Keep drawing boxes and cylinders from life and start practicing drawing them from imagination, maybe watch moderndayjames videos on basic perspective to keep in mind while you do this and maybe do a couple more pages of these animal simplifications. Overall you are ready to move on to the next class.
