@charliepixel
added comment inHow can I improve this?
3yr
It's a really good start. Your perspective and foreshortening is good.
My suggestion:
Before making a single stroke, think about it beforehand...line weight and gestures.
practice with form and light simple shapes.
and just erase and redraw what doesn't look fine.
These things will take a lil bit of time at first but with time it'll become like an instinct.