Ok, second one I did before I actually watched the instructional video, so it doesn’t have sharp edges. First one I did after watching the instructional video. 3rd one I did while watching the demo video, but I didn’t like how thin it turned out, so the fourth one was after the demo video. And then the fifth one I did because the two shadow tones seemed so close together in 4 and I wanted just one more go at the pear.

The first one I did before watching the instructional video. The second one I did after I watched the instructional video but before I watched the demo video. And the third I did while watching the demo video. Any thoughts?