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@cecille
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3yr
added comment inHow to Simplify the Motion of the Torso – The Bean
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Gave it a shot.
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3yr
Really nice! There isn't much to critique, just some thoughts:
LINE QUALITY
Some lines are a little scratchy. If you haven't already I strongly recommend watching this video How to Hold and Control Your Pencil. Drawing from your shoulder is a great technique that helps you draw long fluid lines in one go.
If you've already watched it (judging from your gesture quicksketches you might already be drawing from you shoulder), then don't worry :) Just make yourself aware of line quality and eventually the lines will start to come out cleaner and cleaner
PRACTICE TIPS
I attached an image with some practice tips that helped me a lot when I took the course. Hopefully they can be of some help to you too :)
Cheers!
@cecille
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3yr
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Here's some 30 sec gesture drawings I did today. Would love some feedback. Thanks!
So, I remember being at this point myself. I had not done a lot of gestures or quick study drawings and I was struggling to understand. There is a gob of information to process and in my case, I was having a hard time understanding.
Things I found out by practicing with professional artists:
#01. I was actually doing better than I thought I was doing. It was nice to watch a pro make some incredible art, and even nicer to see that they had drawings where they struggled too.
#02. The purpose of doing very fast gesture drawings is to train your eye to find the largest line/lines of action AND to loosen up. More important than volume or proportion, you are looking to express the activity as clearly as possible. This means that you spend most of your time capturing the line of action. Focus on that. I normally have to draw two, three, or four lines to capture the action, then I reinforce those lines with long, flowing lines. Don't worry about putting in all of the pieces.
#03. Strike a balance between abstraction and volume. Details can never be captured in 30 seconds.
#04. A LOT of correct practice makes perfect. Step back from what you've done, compare it to the source, and if you've made a mistake, do not reinforce that mistake by doing a bunch of similar drawings. You will end up having to break those bad habits before you can progress again. The "force" series is a fantastic reference to drawing the figure quickly.
Hey cecille,
First off, good on you for posting your stuff! =)
Second, I think you did a great job capturing the basic position, facing, and energy of the model in very few lines and with no mess. I especially like the expressive cross contour you used for the hips in some of these, such as the figure on bottom left of page 1.
A good next step for you might be to improve on flow. Your gestures capture a great deal of information and character, but I think your short lines make them more disconnected and stiff than they could be. Try this: take the leg of the figure on page 2, bottom left - make the same shape as your two strokes, but continue the center line all the way down to the foot instead. I attached my own go at it if you wanna see what I mean.
Thanks for reading and keep trucking ;)
@cecille
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3yr
Well, I tried but this is really hard when you know basically no anatomy. So hopefully this is good enough for a first try.