B Man
B Man
Pacific Northwest, USA
Jonas
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Well, I tried to implement the critiques and I think I m more happy with the adjustments of the first one, rather than make a new one with changing the perspective and creating a new image. I think it could work in the end, but in the end it ll be just a bit better for a lot more time and effort, so I think its time for new projects. What is your opinion?
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B Man
In the first illustration, we see where the light bends and circles back, which helps move the eye around the composition, but in the second, those turns are hidden. I think I like the first better for this reason. The colors are striking in both, however!
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Christopher Tomley
Hey everyone! My name's Chris and I've recently taken up drawing mainly due to the draftsman podcasts infectious enthusiasm and positivity. I've started with the book 'drawing on the right side of the brain' Then I'm hoping to move on to one of the great courses on here. Here's one of my assignments from the book and a personal WIP of Grogu using a photo reference. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated 🙂
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