Hi! just picked up the course again after a while. Feedback would be much appreciated

For animation, I assume sound is required?

Here’s what I have so far. The movie is a sort of detective thriller based around my family. This is basically what’s going on in my head, trying to put the pieces together. My father, who is an inspector, has gone missing.

Here’s the assignment from this lesson:

these are the assignments from the structure video. Critiques?