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My first mannequin, please give some feed back. I really want to get better at this.
Alexander Wegner
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Hello! I've noticed a couple of things:
1-I belive you have missed out on gesture, since the legs aren't very dynamic. Also the legs are closer together and I believe you shouldn't draw the knee has a separte entity but as a part of the upper leg like a oval.
2-In this types of poses where the shoulders are facing down you should draw them as upside down pyramids, I advice you to watch the demostrations that are available.
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Hello!
I have done this drawing, any feedbacks are welcom. Thanks :D!
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Hi, any comments would be appreciated thanks.
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I advice you to see Stan's examples of gesture drawings. First try to do the poses yourself, then draw along Stan and finally repeat the drawing from Stan without looking at it, from memory. This will give you and insightful way on how to do a gesture drawing.
I hope that helps!
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Hello! I did this 2 minute gesture drawings. Critiques are welcom, thanks!
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Hi! I've just done this 2 minutes gesture. Critiques are welcome!
Hello! I have just finished this drawibg of Yoni 282. I'm aware that the left leg is to wide. Critiques are welcomed!
Hi! I did this drawing of Yoni 124. Critiques are apreciated, thank you!
Hello everyone. Thanks for a bit of feedback. I know these are not great, but they are very first attempts. Trying to seek feedback early during practice to avoid getting used to mistakes.
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I feel like you need to go back and practice gesture, the bean, robo bean, landmarks and structure.
The boxes from the torso don't follow perspective and they aren't based on the landarks. The arms and legs aren't really cilinders, you drew a gesture and put wrapping lines around it. Also the gesture is stiff and there isn't a flow throught the body, this is due to the "sknowman effect", watch the video again to know what I am refering to.
In conclusion you have to think of the body as different parts that combined resemble a person, so you need to know how to do all of thoose parts and based them in gesture.
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Hello everyone I've just done theese drawings. It would really help me if you have any feedback. Thanks :D!
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Hello there! I have been drawing the mannequin for a while now but havent really gotten any critique yet, so I would love some critique so I'll work on my mistakes and move on to anatomy.
I have done this 30 second gestures. Critiques are welcom.
Another 30 second gestures studyes. Again, critiques are welcom.
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Hey guys, i tried mannequin pls let me know how are they and what should i improve.😺
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It looks fine to me. But I have a big concern, on the second drawing you draw the pelvis with two side plains, don't do that. We are trying to simplify everycing into simple shapes and the pelvis we draw it as a box. So you have to think of a box while drawing it and a simple box can't show two side plains, it's impossible. For that to happen it would mean that the box it's expanding, the plane we are facing is smaller than the one that is facing away from us.
I hope that helps!
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Is head/face anatomy essential for portrait?
Hey! I have alot of trouble drawing stuff in perspective and that looks 3D and natural, especially bodies and Portraits, what are your suggestions about how I can draw objects in spaces?
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I belive the best tool is the page "DrawBox". The page has a lot of lesson for begginners and more advanced students.
Hi Stephen,
I've heard a lot of other artists saying that a good reference picture is really important, so how do we tell if the reference picture we pick is good enough to use? And just curious, but what art school did you go to?
Thank you
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Proko has made a section of a video about this. The video is "Five common shading mistakes". Jeff Watts also made a video about it.
Is it better to start a painting with a drawing in graphite/charcoal or to draw with paint? If its the latter one which colour is the best to use?
I have just done this figure drawing of Yoni. I would really apreciate some critique. Thank you!
The image is Yoni 249.
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I have just done this figure drawing of Yoni. I would really apreciate some critique. Thank you!
The image is Yoni 249.
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Is your new course ment for only begginers? Or it will teach some intermediate and hight techniques and skills?
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