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Steve Lenze
Hey alaa11, I think it's good that you want to improve on your lines, but don't forget to also keep working on your head construction. You need to keep your features and proportions correct before you worry too much about your line quality. I did a quick draw over to show you how you can build the head properly, I hope this helps :)
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@alaa11
wow. thanks so much, guess i was focusing on the wrong thing i will start working on my head construction. thanks again!
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@alaa11
here's another one :
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@alaa11
thanks for the feedback everyone update : https://www.proko.com/community/topics/trying-to-improve-my-line any advice is appreciated
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@alaa11
hey i made this post a couple of days ago asking how can i improve my lines: https://www.proko.com/community/topics/how-can-i-improve-my-lines and i received great advice and i tried to use it in this this drawing (mainly slowing down, thinking before putting lines on paper and removing distractions like youtube videos and podcasts.) any critic is welcomed on the lines or anything else
@johnercek
ok- first off- there's a lot charm in your lines right now, lots of personality to them. But you aren't wrong in feeling like you want to control them more, because there will be times where you need to. So here's an exercise for that. (see image)
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@alaa11
thanks seems like a great exercise, will definitely try.
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@hunt4animation
Draw with intention. Draw with a concentrated effort to follow through with the line in one stroke and to use minimal lines. Just drawing with a pen will not help but it may help realize what lines are being put down and what are necessary.
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@alaa11
thanks man i think i am drawing while being distracted (listening to podcasts/youtube videos) also i may be drawing too fast (still new to drawing so i can't really control my tembo,i just draw as fast as possible) i will try to slow down and focus more
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@alaa11
I feel like my lines are too scratchy and random Its like i am putting too many lines in a sketch Any feedback is appreciated.
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