Nvm. I see it now. The eye is too far to the right and I was basing the nose off of that. Fixing it tomorrow.

Two more. Ink came out better than expected

Overall pretty good. The proportions of the head and feet compared to the body are a bit off, but not by too much. Errors like that can be easily fixed before committing to a dark line, try to keep all your searching lines light until you find the correct proportions. You have very nice line quality in general here, keep it up!

you when deep on dracing the laces , cool . I'd suggest to shapen your pencil , that may give you better line quality

Redid the snail and did the camel

You nailed it!