Lars Engel
added comment inHow to Simplify the Motion of the Torso – The Bean
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Lars Engel
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I'd love critique on my 30 second gesture poses. I've been approaching them iteratively, sketching each twice with a slightly different approach. I still feel as though I am seeing too much contour, and I especially struggled with torsos that are twisted such that they're completely or nearly profile.
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maybe also try getting more from instead of just spaghetti, and combining that with more intentional lineweight to show force also helps a lot i think
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i think the second and forth are unclear as to what direction the person is facing. i see them facing to the front of the camera, but they are not. i like your clean dynamic lines with matching proportions i lot though.
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