Hi @Yanowiec, Nice drawing and good storytelling! On first glance everything is good: pose, colors, mood, style. As you asked for feedback I tried to take a closer look: Do you know what a tangent is? It is an area, where one grafic element touches another one. These areas tend to draw the attention to them and it is often better to avoid them. There are some tangents or nearly tangents in your drawing. I have overdrawn your picture an marked them yellow. And the plants in the room are hurting the silhouette of the girl (marked red). These areas feel strange for me, especially the area where the plant pokes the girl's left shoulder. Is this intented? And I am not sure about the hands: They do not really grab the bottle and the glas. It looks like they let drop bottle and glas. Is this part of the story?