@thecookiehero880
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@fefelix
Hey everyone, I've just imagined some pelvises. I hadn't figured out how to make the bucket non-cylindrical on the first two tries; is the change noticeable? Or are the second two still two cylindrical? Also please critique my line quality and general proportions, if you want to :)
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@thecookiehero880
Some really solid work here! My only critique is the top-right pelvis - given that the horizontal, wide axis of the pelvis is heavily forshortened at this angle, I think you drew the bucket a little too wide and skinny. I have attached an image of a pelvis in a similar position and you can see it is less wide than what you have depicted. I also believe the back side of the illium in the same drawing is a bit too flate and you could have shown some more curvature. One final nitpick - the illiac crest is thicker than what you show in some of your drawings; I would show some more of a top plane.
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@thecookiehero880
Here are my imagined pelvises! Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
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@fefelix
Hi there! These three poses are the ones I am the most unsure about. Any suggestions / critiques in terms of structure / anatomy / line quality etc. are very welcome. Especially for the one with the twisted rib cage hehe
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@thecookiehero880
Hey there! The proportions and anatomy seem pretty well done to me. I think you could make the spine thicker, currently they look a lot thinner than what stan tends to do. I also think the head in the bottom left drawing is a bit sketchy - in the original photo it appears more vertically angled. The connection between the skull and spine is a bit off too; your guiding lines make the spine look ovular and flat, and the angle of attachment is a bit extreme -- if you look at a reference, the spine tends to curve into the skull..
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@thecookiehero880
Here is my work for the third assignment! Obviously the linework is atrocious and I'm trying to improve. Any advice on that or anything anatomy wise is greatly appreciated!
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