Hi Sylvester! Good start, you're using nice curves. It looks like you're focusing a lot on the contours, rather than the flow/action of the pose. You don't need to show all the contours in gesture. Also practice bigger lines to get rid of the scratchiness. Don't worry about accuracy at this stage, you want to show energy and suggestion. Are these timed? A good way to focus is to set 30 sec or 1 minute timers to really get you thinking about the big movements and not capture detail. Be loose and messy :)