Shelvs Fleurima
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Hello this project took me a month to come up with. It’s an underwater gollum protecting the honor of a jelly fish lasso from those helpless romantic humans. Something is off with the final painting, but I don’t know exactly what? Any criticism is welcome.
Rachael Sweeney
2yr
The design work is good. The sketches are clear, and the creature’s silhouette is interesting. Even your illustration is well rendered, but it feels visually cluttered; possibly because everything is rendered at the same level of detail. The composition could be stronger. Try exploring alternate compositions with thumbnails. Really show off that creature design.
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