Hello comrades. This is my current line up, I plan on doing 2 more but I'm retrying the ideation phase and this time aiming to stray away from the illustration side and more focus towards shape language and thumbnail drawings, as per the advice given in the critique video. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. I'll continue to try and make adjustments through error.

Hello. Should we still draw 2-3 inches for this process? The other video mentioned to pick a few characters from the one's we developed, does 3 sound good or is that a stretch?Should we stick to one?

Hi. I did the process again but this time I tried to make the drawings 2-3 inches as instructed. I came up with some new ideas but also added to the old ideas in a way. I listed some of my thoughts going into these sheets, but I generally forget to write everything down before drawing, mainly because I keep mental notes of what I'm looking to draw and once I have those ideas I tend to tunnel vision it until it's on paper.

Hello everyone here's the last 3 pages to my first post on Crow-man. I took everyone's advice and I'm surprised at some of the ideas I came up with, most notably the 2nd and 3rd pages I was really in the zone that day.

Here's the first page of my Crow-man ideas, I'm completely stuck after this page I can't seem to think of other possibilities, I know Scott said to aim for 4 pages but not sure what else I can incorporate into this Crow-man? Anyway thanks for reading I'll try and think hard what else I can change or add.