Alex Aruj
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4mo
2b pencil no erase
4mo
10 hands, 5 min. each. Pushing my boundaries using Krita pencils, shapes, freehand selection mask among others
2yr
Pretty strong work. There are some ways you could get the cats to stand out more. The lightest areas of the basket seem too bright. It might be that there is space between the wicker of the basket, but it could be distracting. Your dark areas could be darker. I think there is still some canvas showing through. One of the cats ears is folded? It might be neat to see it blocking the other cat partially.
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Inspired by "Los Angeles 200: A Bicentennial Celebration" by Art Seidenbaum and photos by John Malmin - aerial view of Palos Verdes p. 25 Buffalo on Catalina Island p. 48, Hay Bales in San Fernando Valley p. 35, Ships in LA Harbor p. 205, and Sheep at Calabasas p. 64
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I would love any feedback on this, I’m trying to simplify this image in my mind for this challenge. I keep wanting to add the rocks in on the left, but I don’t know if they help or hurt. I’m leaning toward getting rid of them in keeping with the simplification part of this challenge.
Alex Aruj
2yr
The high contrast rocks banking off the banks and guiding my eye toward the horizon feel the best composition to me
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Hi! Here are my thumbnails: What is working / not working for you? Thanks for your feedback! These are inspired by "Los Angeles 200 A Bicentennial Celebration" by Art Seidenbaum and photos by John Malmin
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